Rohinton MIstry’s A Fine Balance is a very good example of the sort of book that I would probably not choose to read on my own, but might very well give a try if someone else mentions reading it. Aside from the possibility of a really interesting discovery, such as I made a couple of years ago with C J Box’s Joe Pickett novels, there is the certainty that I will learn something about the person recommending it.
As it was published in 1997, there is nothing recent about Mistry’s book. In 1997, I’m pretty sure, I would have rejected the idea of reading it within three or four lines of a review, and even now, of at any rate until just this morning, I was uncertain about whether it was worth my time to discuss it. If I say that it reminded me of Dickens, but with better characterizations, that gives the measure of my ambivalence.
Perhaps I’ve never cared for Dickens because I’m not a Victorian; perhaps I require other outrages to pluck my heartstrings. Outrages are certainly on offer in A Fine Balance. The novel is set during “the Emergency,” twenty-odd months of virtual martial law — crony lawlessness, actually — declared by Indira Gandhi in 1975 after she was found to have cheated in an election. To say that the story harmonizes with the ICE era is terrifyingly easy. To read of a character’s being be plucked out of his life more or less arbitrarily and subjected to penal conditions is usually easy to take when set in the context of the past, but wrenching when the prospect is actual, now. There is nothing, alas, dated about many of the bad things that happen in this novel.
A Fine Balance runs to about 600 pages. It concerns four people — two Dalits and two Parsis — struggling in Bombay. The Untouchables, uncle and nephew, come from a rural village where their forebears served immemorially as cobblers (tanners plus, you might say) until one patriarch decided to send his two sons off to a nearby town as apprentices to a Muslim tailor with whom he had become friendly over the years. One son has died, leaving his son in his brother’s care. The two Parsis are, first, a widow in her early forties who married for love, lost her husband to a bicycle accident on their third anniversary, and took up sewing as a way of making a living and remaining independent of her overbearing pooh-bah of a brother. As her eyesight begins to fail, she looks for new sources of income. An old schoolfriend provides two solutions, both of which she adopts. She takes in, as a boarder, the college-age son of another old school friend, one who lives far away. This boy is the fourth character. The widow also takes on, initially as employees, the two tailors. Perhaps the most interesting thing about the story that engages them all is its complete lack of romance. This is a novel without love stories. That’s important.
There has been love in the past, of course — the widow’s short marriage, not to mention the warmth of the tailors’ family, now all dead — but it is kept somewhat offstage, reserved for the early chapters that are devoted to everybody’s backstory (running back to the time of the Partition). There is also good deal of bad luck in everybody’s past, but it’s of a different nature from the up-front, story-proper disasters that are seen to be peculiar to the Emergency — and to the mushrooming of Bombay itself. The aspect of the Emergency that caught the outraged attention of the West, I recall, was Gandhi’s sterilization campaign, which raged in provincial areas almost as a political terror, directed against the unfortunate castes. The Republic had hitherto endeavored to equalize its citizens — generating racist hatreds such as we have become familiar with in our own day.
Notwithstanding the author’s willingly Dickensian, or at least Victorian, reliance on coincidence, his quartet of leading figures is unsentimentally attractive — sometimes, they’re not “attractive” at all. The exception, almost invariably appealing, is Ishvar, the uncle of the other tailor, Om (for Omprakash). Even Ishvar, though, can be foolishly dogged about his responsibility to see that Om gets married. Perhaps this preoccupation takes on its foolish cast in light of its consequences, in the turbulence of the Emergency. Ishvar is at heart a peace-maker, playing a vital role in the ad hoc household that develops in the widow Dina’s flat.
For nearly twenty years, Dina has been fighting her landlord’s attempt to evict her. The landlord wants to upgrade his property but, just like the owners of the building that I live in, he cannot do so while stuck with sitting tenants paying regulated low rents. So he sniffs for violations of the lease, with which, now that the story is getting going, Dina provides him, first by running a business on the premises and second by taking in Maneck, the college student, as a paying guest. Eventually, thanks to the scarcity of “affordable housing” in Bombay, she allows the tailors to sleep on her veranda. All of this entangles her in a protection racket that is among the many elements of her life as a contractor and an Aunty that fall apart at the end of the story.
Dina lives in the narrow zone between intelligence and cynicism. She expects the worst out of everybody, but is warmed to the marrow by any evidence to the contrary. Her caution often seems to have been, in retrospect, as foolish as Ishvar’s preoccupation with his nephew’s marriage. But it is clear that this caution, this inherent sobriety, has underwritten her independence. She borrows from her brother but she always repays the loan. She puts up with the smug grandiosity of the executive on whom she depends for her contract work. Somehow, Mistry makes this not-very-endearing quality sympathetic. We certainly don’t kid ourselves that we’d be more daring under the circumstances.
Unlike Dina, Ishvar, and Om, Maneck comes from the North, from a hill station. His father was once a great landowner, but Partition drew a line that cut him off from the bulk of his property, and at the beginning of A Fine Balance, he runs a prosperous general store that does a flourishing business in a family-secret soft drink. Maneck’s very happy childhood was terminated by his parents’ decision to send him to boarding school; Maneck has ever since regarded this as an undeserved exile. And from then on, he can’t decipher his father’s admittedly mixed signals. Farokh, the father, has all the usual succession problems: he dreams of passing on his business to his son, but won’t allow the boy to take any initiative so long as he himself is in control. Of course he doesn’t see this contradiction, and neither do his wife and son. It is a familiar, unhappy story, very well told.
Living with Dina Aunty in Bombay, Maneck finds a natural companion in Om, who is the same age, and they have many late-adolescent adventures. They quarrel over Dina (I can’t remember just how), but it isn’t serious. What’s serious is Maneck’s loss of academic drive. He slacks off in his courses, and his marks are so poor that he is not accepted as a long-term student. Instead, he takes the advice of one of his father’s friends and pursues a career in Dubai, which turns out to be soul-killing, as well as the fall of another element in Dina’s ménage. As a fictional adolescent on the verge of manhood, Maneck is unusual in being charming even when he’s a bit thick-headed. He is, genuinely, a good boy, but this fails to protect him from the vicissitudes of life, which, compared with Om’s, are very mild. Existential emotions do not occur to the tailors, understandably; they’ve never known the luxury. Maneck is eventually overcome by his.
Quite unobtrusively, I think, Mistry maintains a sense of the imbalance between the two pairs of characters, in that Dina and Maneck are troubled by doubts and uncertainies that do not occur to either of the tailors, who in contrast considerable physical hardship. Ishvar and Om are very durable fellows, as indeed they would have to be to endure the vicissitudes that, we are also aware, would never befall Dina and Maneck, perched as they are in the middle class — the class to be protected by the Emergency.
More than this I cannot say without revealing all four endings. In the final scene, three of the four are united in furtive festivity. It is the happiness of people who make the best of things, and very far from the “satisfying” resolutions with which the Victorians closed their novels.
As I say, until this morning I was still puzzled about wanting to take the time to write all this out. A Fine Balance, while hardly intended for a mass readership, is somewhat too straightforward in tone, for all its length, to be quite “literary” in the Western sense. It’s about people’s ups and downs. Mistry’s way of writing does not call attention to his psychological insights, nor, further, into a coherent criticism of India. “The Emergency” is more natural disaster than political tragedy. A few characters on the side appear to have undergone Proustian metamorphoses between their recurrences in the story (think of Widmerpool, if you prefer), but as a literary device this is less substance than decoration. There doesn’t seem to be anything ingenious about the novel.
Which tells you a lot about my limitations. As I pondered the novel in bed this morning, I grasped that what bound me to A Fine Balance is its very unsentimental group portrait. Mistry brings together four sharply delineated characters, each the potential subject of stand-alone fictional treatment, and draws them tightly together in a difficult time. Love provides nothing in the way of glue. Circumstance, opportunity, and eventually affection hold Dina, Maneck, Ishvar and Om together, but in a gravitational field so weak that their ineffectual desire to go on living together is bathed in a plangent light. They want to go on because they work together, their combination makes each of them better. This attachment is not to be confused with the bonds of love, which draws so much of its power from its involuntary force. The tailors and their Parsi roommates are more like people who work harmoniously in an office. The difference is that they all blossom in their small community, and fade outside of it.
Very simply, A Fine Balance is a novel about unplanned but collective transcendence. Neither heroes nor villains, the members of Mistry’s quartet discover not only an alternative to individual self-realization but its unavailability. This is nothing but the truth of any small social network. It would be obtuse to conclude that the best parts of A Fine Balance are about something as strenuous as principled cooperation. No, they’re about the sheer grace of mere coexistence, of sharing space, meals, and all the rest. They do not expect to be friends. They are all motivated by financial considerations. But the result is a brief flowering of sympathy and care.
And the beautiful secret of this small miracle? On the last page, Dina observes, “These two make me laugh every day. Like Maneck…” Not the laughter of comedy, but the laughter of congeniality. Over years, fiction hasn’t paid congeniality the attention it deserves.